ext_27262 ([identity profile] jedishampoo.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tanaquiljall 2009-03-24 05:49 am (UTC)

Even as he struck out to hamstring the orc – perhaps not the kind of heroic stroke the minstrels preferred to glorify, but rather more effective in the midst of battle

This, in particular, seemed very "Faramir." :) I like your effective writing of action and dread; I was actually getting a little worried about them there, for a while.

Thanks for sharing!

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