Thank you for letting me know you like the fic, and that you thought what I did with Heather's thoughts was convincing. *g*

I love Jake and Heather, although I ship Heather and Beck

Well, I also really like Heather and Beck - or, more accurately, I adore the Jake-Heather-Beck love triangle. (I'm expecting to write a lot more fic about that....) While I probably lean ultimately towards Jake/Heather, I wouldn't be totally unhappy with a universe in which Heather and Beck ended up together.... *g*

Thanks again for the kind words - they're very encouraging.