ext_67962 ([identity profile] inanna7.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tanaquiljall 2009-05-02 06:33 pm (UTC)

:) Nice bit of triangular tension going on there. Like Jake's introspection, understanding that, in some ways, Heather wants or feels that she needs to be with Beck and not liking it, just biting his tongue. Very Jake. And his sympathizing for Beck's situation despite what Beck did to him. It's a nice and true character study of Jake.

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