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tanaquiljall ([personal profile] tanaquiljall) wrote2007-05-16 07:53 pm
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Day 30: Great and Terrible

[livejournal.com profile] phyloxena wondered How about Faramir with the Ring? And with good short-term results, to add to the confusion? Or, Aragorn, for that matter?

I couldn't quite see how to do Faramir yet, but I did imagine how Aragorn might have fared with the Ring.

Day 30



Great and Terrible

The debate raged back and forth: to hide or destroy or wield. At last Aragorn stood and drew Narsil. "The Sword shall be reforged. I will take the Ring and lead us to Victory."

The Free Peoples united under the banner of the King who put heart into his allies and fear into his foes. All bowed before the Ringbearer, even proud Denethor.

Long years they fought. Aragorn grew deaf to the weeping of widows, the cries of children starving while land went untilled, the pleas of mothers with sons pressed to service.

Surely the sacrifice was worth the Victory?
paranoidangel: PA (Aragorn tea time)

[personal profile] paranoidangel 2007-05-16 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That drabble's well titled, for it is both great and terrible.
paranoidangel: PA (Default)

Re: Thanks

[personal profile] paranoidangel 2007-05-17 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Er... I think you meant that as a compliment. *g*

I did, sorry! I meant that the drabble's great because the content is so terrible. Or something like that.
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[personal profile] scribblesinink 2007-05-16 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Chilling...

[identity profile] gwynnyd.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
whimper... for Aragorn and Middle-earth. Tanaqui is certainly doing her best to make poor Gwynnyd pull the covers over her head and hide.

The quest certainly stood on a knife edge, and power is so seductive. The best of intentions are so hard to put aside for a 'greater good'.

[identity profile] phyloxena.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
By the way, I just rediscovered your stories on SoA and planning on flooding you with exited comments.

[identity profile] gwynnyd.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Blush... I tried to reply to your review but it bounced as 'no such user'.

Thank you!


And Liz - sorry for hijacking your thread here...

Gwynnyd

[identity profile] phyloxena.livejournal.com 2007-05-16 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. Not exactly good results... Thank you! The point is "grew deaf", of course.

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2007-05-17 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
I love the way the final lines show how good intentions come to nothing where the Ring is concerned !

(Anonymous) 2007-05-17 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my. Great job showing how even the strongest and worthiest souls are eventually twisted by the Ring, all in one drabble. Very well-chosen images!

Denise