Ahhh... just wonderful, wonderful. I love how you incorporated his indifference to Aman, that the reason he would finally sail was to be reunited with his beloved wife, and that you hearkened back to the themes of the drabble describing Celeborn's first sighting of his love.
My favorite line: For the melody of a voice deepened by grief and lightened by love.
What a great way to (hopefully) expunge that song from your head! Any chance we'll see more in this series? Their parting? Their reunion? Other events? *hopeful look*
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Date: 2008-02-21 07:04 am (UTC)My favorite line: For the melody of a voice deepened by grief and lightened by love.
What a great way to (hopefully) expunge that song from your head! Any chance we'll see more in this series? Their parting? Their reunion? Other events? *hopeful look*