Must repeat the accolades above: excellent action, very Faramiric (?) thinking processes. Your descriptions are vivid and compelling as ever. (Faramir crouched with his back against a rock, trying to calm his ragged breathing. Despite the chill in the air, sweat trickled down his face under his mask, and his undershirt stuck to his back.) And all the usual awesome details, like having to pause to string his bow and the lack of magical ever-full quivers.
I also really liked the hamstring line, and the brief respite while the orcs decided who was in charge, and the clever use of alternate ammunition.
What were the specifics of the challenge? I clicked the link to the Twilight Zone journal, but for some reason it displayed very wanky on my computer.
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Date: 2009-04-07 06:19 pm (UTC)I also really liked the hamstring line, and the brief respite while the orcs decided who was in charge, and the clever use of alternate ammunition.
What were the specifics of the challenge? I clicked the link to the Twilight Zone journal, but for some reason it displayed very wanky on my computer.