You are always good at vivid imagery, but this one really is exceptional. The language is awesome at setting up the various scenes and capturing the desperation and grief involved, as is the reminder of the humanity of the enemy. Fantastic use of the quote as title.
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Date: 2010-06-22 12:39 am (UTC)