Okay, I generally avoid genderswap stories, but because it was you with ScribblesinInk as beta, I thought I'd give it a try.
I'm so glad I did - this was hilarious!! From Bill's leering, Jimmy's affable cluelessness, to Stanley "busting" (no pun intended) out of his/her plaid shirt...bwahahahaha!!!
But these just about killed me:
Beck seemed almost embarrassed to be making the inspection, quite unlike Bill's open leering, and somehow that was far, far worse. Jake had a horrible feeling that, deep inside him, all those new female hormones were pointing out to him that Beck was attractive.
and
Jake realized with annoyance that Heather was right: Beck was a good man.
Or maybe that was just the hormones speaking again....
BWAHAHAHAHA!! Well, that puts an entirely different spin on the Beck/Heather/Jake triangle, doesn't it... BWAHAHAHA!!
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Date: 2009-08-13 09:22 pm (UTC)I'm so glad I did - this was hilarious!! From Bill's leering, Jimmy's affable cluelessness, to Stanley "busting" (no pun intended) out of his/her plaid shirt...bwahahahaha!!!
But these just about killed me:
Beck seemed almost embarrassed to be making the inspection, quite unlike Bill's open leering, and somehow that was far, far worse. Jake had a horrible feeling that, deep inside him, all those new female hormones were pointing out to him that Beck was attractive.
and
Jake realized with annoyance that Heather was right: Beck was a good man.
Or maybe that was just the hormones speaking again....
BWAHAHAHAHA!! Well, that puts an entirely different spin on the Beck/Heather/Jake triangle, doesn't it... BWAHAHAHA!!
Thanks for this. Great little story. :D