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When we were discussing the Long Winter which was the setting for yesterday's drabble, [livejournal.com profile] elena_tiriel suggested I write something about snow-trolls.

Day 310

Stalk Like A Snow-Troll

In the long, drowsy months, they retreat to ice caves beneath the glaciers to dream away the heat of summer.

As the last leaves fall on the lower slopes, and frozen flakes dance in the moonlight in the high pastures, they stir, wake, renew their strength on a first meal hoarded in packed snow since the previous spring.

When a soft white blanket stretches across the land, they venture further, to where herds of shivering horses and cattle huddle together. From time to time, they cross paths with unwary travellers, hunters and herdsmen, lost children.

They fear nothing, save fire.

Date: 2008-02-21 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elena-tiriel.livejournal.com
Oh! Very evocative, Liz... the environment sounds absolutely beautiful... (except for the unspoken part about freezing your assets off....)

Well done!

- Barbara

Date: 2008-02-21 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dkpalaska.livejournal.com
This has to be the first fanfic I've seen about snow-trolls. The descriptions are stellar, as always, and you gave a really romantic spin to them - at least, up until the line about unwary travellers, hunters and herdsmen, lost children. Yikes!

Date: 2008-03-06 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dkpalaska.livejournal.com
(And love your new icon too!)

Thank you! Although... I was still using the old one when I made this comment, and have since discovered a quirk of LJ: Once I changed which icon was my default, it got changed in every comment in which I'd ever had "(default)" selected as the icon to display. So the lesson is: don't change your default icon! At least, not too often... *g*

Date: 2008-02-21 10:13 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] jay-of-lasgalen.livejournal.com
This is lovely, so descriptive and poetic!

*Shiver* I pity the poor unwary travellers, though ...


Jay

Date: 2008-02-21 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwynnyd.livejournal.com
I have to go outside today, into the cold. Fortunately there is not enough snow to hide a troll or two,or I might be tempted to just stay home.


Date: 2008-02-25 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rakshathedemon.livejournal.com
Ooh; scary-good. Very slow and lazy and evil drabble, just like the monstrous trolls.

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